Many people believe that pets are treated as strangers however I believe that these animals should be treated as our own family member.They make good friends and can feel the emotion of master irrespective of their age. The following paragraphs entails pets being a close family member and its advantages.
To begun with, pets are man's good friends. They can be trusted more than any human beings. For instance, dogs when tamed to be with human he becomes a good friend. Likewise, these animals do play with humans and can keep the feeling of loneliness away. There are a lot of people living as single and having a pet can easily help them cope with the problem of solitude. They easily blends with humans like as if they can recognize human behavior which can be an instinct.
Secondly, animals can sense the feeling of their masters. They can analyse if the humans are sad or happy accordingly they behave and provide a good companion to man. For instance, sometimes dogs can sense if their master is in danger and can alert the immediate relatives. Thus unknowingly they can be useful for people. Thus I think that it should be treated as a family member because its truthful and thankful nature.
However, pets can be annoying to its masters by its aggressive nature and can even be source of disease. To illustrate, if one is allergic to the animal hair they should keep a distance from them since it can be allergic. Similarly, the aggressive nature can also irritate us. Yet, their cute face would not allow us to hate them or abandon. Thus care should be given in their health aspects and be properly cleaned daily so that the negative side of pets being a family mate can be avoided and prevented.
To conclude, I think that pets are a good source of company and can understand the mind of their masters so can be considered as a family member. But, careful planing must be ensured regarding their cleanliness and health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...uld be treated as our own family member.They make good friends and can feel the emot...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'entail'.
Suggestion: entail
... of their age. The following paragraphs entails pets being a close family member and it...
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'blend'
Suggestion: blend
...th the problem of solitude. They easily blends with humans like as if they can recogni...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... and can alert the immediate relatives. Thus unknowingly they can be useful for peop...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nowingly they can be useful for people. Thus I think that it should be treated as a ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...d not allow us to hate them or abandon. Thus care should be given in their health as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7008797654 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4345793084 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519061583578 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6044598604 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.15 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256613991545 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926787795656 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783222659426 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170872100841 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591994414481 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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