Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison, so as to reduce the crime rate.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Crime is a serious and growing issue in the most societies. While I accept that criminals should be stayed longer sentences to cut down the number of crime, I would argue that government should consider the reasons for the offence to punish a suitable prison time.
On the one hand, there are some reasons to explain criminals should be in prison for a long time to set the example. The convincing argument is that it is likely to be the best solution to uphold an ordered society. As we know, the dangerous social crimes such as murder or assault are serious harm to the community. Therefore, if those wrongdoers commit crimes and get longer sentences, people will live in a safe and secure environment. It is also argued that giving a long time of life imprisonment aims at doing justice for all. All citizens should obey the law and follow the rules stipulated by the government. Even though you hold a high office, you will be in jail if you break the law.
With further consideration, I would argue that we should explore the causes of crime to have a fair trial. Crime usually originates from unemployment, poverty and illiteracy. For example, he or she is poor, and his or her children have nothing to eat. As a result, stealing is the way to feed their children. This case needs to apply a light sentence. As a judge, one can pass sentence but one can also help reform a criminal. A judge who convicts a criminal to stay a long time in jail, he does not have a chance to start his life. For example, he or she spends 40 years in prison, no more time for him or her to reintegrate socially. So he or she fails to lead a new life after leaving prison.
In conclusion, while there are several benefits when the wrongdoers should be given a long time of life imprisonment, I believe that the government should figure out the causes of crime and give the prisoner a chance to start again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5658571487 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3559634379 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9473684211 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226019335321 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603490052553 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559038574366 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150669244016 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512328955863 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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