Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this could be better spent elsewhere?

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...thority is squanderring money on the art,however this money could be better spent on oth...
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...t on other sectors of life as it has it own importance in the world. To begin wi...
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...mportance in the world. To begin with,the arts play pivotal role as it is the col...
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... guve sustenance to these art galleries.In addition they believe in exposing their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47388059701 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49147475545 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.322443205 49.4020404114 339% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.4 106.682146367 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2084652055 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110077241372 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110035433772 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110077241372 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110035433772 0.056905535591 193% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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