Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Annie,
I'm writing to thank you for sending the photographs that we clicked during our vacation in Australia.
I am delighted that you arranged this trip. I was very bored of my monotonous work routine and these 10 days were extremely refreshing. I really admire the time we all spent together by looking at these photos, thanks for forwarding it.
I was not able to respond earlier due to some urgent work assignment in my office. The client wanted us to deliver the software within seven days and it kept me occupied in past whole week. Finally, the product is sent to the customer and I got some free time for myself.
I believe we should often go on such holidays, hence, I would like to invite you all to my place in coming month. I really want to have a get together with you all. Do let me know the feasible dates, so that I can do the required arrangements.
Looking forward to hearing from you all.
With Love,
Ajay Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Annie, Im writing to thank you for sending the ph...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...that you arranged this trip. I was very bored of my monotonous work routine and these 10...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hese 10 days were extremely refreshing. I really admire the time we all spent tog...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...se photos, thanks for forwarding it. I was not able to respond earlier due to ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52601156069 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42408201406 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687861271676 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8659040081 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.25 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192600656884 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687626458643 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550534279121 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109034601201 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370823734298 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.