Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
I think technology make our lives more simplified than ever.
Technlogy simplified our lives every perspective. The evolution in technology is helping us. Before Graham Bell introduced the Telephone, our lives was in trouble.
There was no way of instant communication. After introduction of telephone, We were able to communicate a person who is thousand miles away instantly. Motorola invented mobile at starting of 21st century, This made our lives more simpler. Now, instant communication Device fits in our pocket.
One of the measure breakthrough of 21st century, Invenion of Internet : with these you can access information in world that has been published. Literally , Internet makes world look smaller.
For confirmation of disease, we have to go through different tests like checking blood, urine. With help of technology, the invention such as Lab on chip, making lives better in 3rd world country, where healthcare is not advanced. We can check our blood pressure, sugar level instantly because of technology.
In very few ways, technology makes our lives complicated such as oldone's unable to call from mobile. Workforce gets older and go jobless with advancements in technology. But, this can be avoided by continiously upgrading your knowledge.
Technology made our lives simplified.
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- Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military. 33
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- Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated. 33
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ere able to communicate a person who is thousand miles away instantly. Motorola invented...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...ng of 21st century, This made our lives more simpler. Now, instant communication Device fits...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...world that has been published. Literally , Internet makes world look smaller. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 442.535393258 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48258706468 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02476692942 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71144278607 0.4932671777 144% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0454516669 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.8235294118 118.986275619 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8235294118 23.4991977007 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315521221745 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105524585619 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104978063835 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177721631787 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965646802483 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 48.8420337079 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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