In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is well known fact that high paid jobs creates the center of attraction for any society. It is argued by some that there should be threshold on the higher wages that an individual can earn while, others believe that high salaried people reflects the economy of any country. This essay will enlighten both side of coin and explain why it is extremely important not to create any threshold on the maximum salary of an individual.
On one hand, government of any country can be benefited by the tax which it produces over the salary of high salaried employees. Most of the countries have tax liability of thirty percent which they direct for the economical development of the nation. It is assumed that organizations are giving benefits based on the performance level of the employee which, in turn, opens the path for employee motivation. Also, most of the companies operates across different nations and there is no point to restrict the upper salary of our own country employee's in foreign companies, otherwise, it is advantageous for them. For example, most of companies operating in information technology sector in India belongs to foreign land and restriction the upper salary creates the negative impact on growth of economy.
On the contrary, there are people who supports the provision of creating upper boundary on the salary. It can lead to reduce the disparity in the salaries for any company. They also advocate the idea of wages should be standardized for the worker's operating in different type of units.For example, people working in IT industry must receive the same benefits as worker in manufacturing industry.
To conclude, despite the fact that high paid positions can widen the gap between the employees, it is must for economic growth for any country to encourage the high paid jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...hirty percent which they direct for the economical development of the nation. It is assume...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
... is advantageous for them. For example, most of companies operating in information technology sec...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...rs operating in different type of units.For example, people working in IT industry ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01655629139 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70933983574 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8683956796 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212562809394 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788849976801 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050724848965 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126547707697 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508053874609 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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