Most people in what are known as the developed nations have homes full of gadgets and labor-saving devices, from vacuum cleaners and dishwashers to the latest in computer technology. Some people claim that despite all these labor-saving devices, we seem to have less free time. In your opinion, has technology improved the quality of life or made it more
In this age and era, it is true that most of the developed countries homes are filled with gadgets and labor saving devices. These electronic devices are to save time and money. In my opinion using the electronic devices gives more accurate and efficient results.
To begin with, there latest technology gadgets are mobile phone used for the many uses. Today’s mobile phone are used for calculations, communication and internet etc, moreover it can be holed in single hand. Communication is very easy with the internet everyone can communicate throughout the world. For example, sending a e-mail(information) through is very easy, but, in olden days it took a lot of time because it is done manually.
Secondly, the labor saving devices like washing machine, dish washer and vacuum cleaner will save the time and no need to appoint another person for this type of works. These days every middle class employee are using these type of gadgets to take some rest at free time.
By this it can be concluded that, Has technology improved the quality of life or made more easy. People will get more free time with these devices. Using of new and advanced technology is very important these days, because advancements in the technology will complete the work more fast and easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'there the latest'.
Suggestion: there the latest
... and efficient results. To begin with, there latest technology gadgets are mobile phone use...
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...oughout the world. For example, sending a e-mailinformation through is very easy,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96279069767 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62262898663 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586046511628 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5539031402 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9166666667 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182194947157 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711253382773 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853154281845 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117942961773 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773678447737 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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