The graph below show the number of cara produced in three countries in 2003,2006,2009 .
The graph depicts the car produced by three different countries Argentina, Australia and Thailand over the period of six years.
Overall,it is plainly viewed that maximum car production was in Thailand. However Australia had minimal car production eventually.
It is explicitly observed that,in 2003 Thailand had the outstanding performance in the sector of car production with the figure of 787,000,which followed by Australia and Argentina of 538,000 ,166,000 respectively. In next three years, the car production showed a magnificent rise up to threefold and Argentina had almost double in production while the Australia observed a decline in car production from 538,000 to 345,000. In 2009, car production in Thailand reached at 999,879 after considerable drop and Australia accounted for 25,000.however, the manufacturing of cars were continue surge and reached at the 510,000 in 2009.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66417910448 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2150324266 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4966072064 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958412979487 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549193758351 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066076981021 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858128636652 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809707710402 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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