is tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage? discuss your views and give your opinion.
Recently, the phenomenon of tourism and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that tourism industry highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that international communication can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From job opportunities standpoint, travel agency can provide the society with noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that booking flights, as well as accommodation, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which deciphered open-mindedness. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both cultural empathy and cultural openness can be seen.
Within the realm of less cultural shock, the broaden horizon might increase the consequences of the source of income. Moreover, fundamental aspects of the language barriers relate to this reality that the demerits of global village pertain to social interaction. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of economic growth is correlated negatively with familiar with the different culture. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of mass tourism.
To conclude, while three are several compelling arguments of both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of tourism welfare far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the social training prove the significance of the foreign culture, but also pinpoints of geographical barriers implications.
- The environment we live in is in danger. what are the underlying causes? who is responsible to combat this? 11
- large shopping malls are replacing small shops.what is your opinion about this?discuss with appropriate examples. 88
- parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. to what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down.to what extent do you agree or disagree? 70
- mass media 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ithin the realm of less cultural shock, the broaden horizon might increase the consequences...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76209677419 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31875905732 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673387096774 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7103226154 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0582624359675 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205947565089 0.0925447433944 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212340860648 0.071462118173 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0335634538702 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019865029587 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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