The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The benefits of public transport is well-known, such as dealing with the problem of traffic jam, providing free public transport in 24 hours each day, however, is a matter of some dispute. In my opinion, I really disagree.
The first of all, making free public transport working all day can harm more the environment. Firstly, it can produce more waste substances such as carbon dioxide. In fact, public transport work to help a lot of people moving in the same time, so it usually be a large transport system and use big amount of energy, followed by produce a lot of carbon dioxide. Moreover, to provide sifficently energy to this system work, people can use more energy from fossil fuel, which affect the Earth’s layers. Then disasters, such volcanoes and earthquakes, and landslides can occur as a result.
Secondly, providing free public transport in 24 hours per day does not give more advantages. Firstly, there are not many people moving in some hours of day, such as at night in when there are not traffic congestions which need to solve. Secondly, it may harm the health of drivers who work at night to serve passengers. Even passengers who use public transport can get threats from traffic accidents because drivers usually be tired at night, that’s why they can not control their vehicles well and have more accidents.
In conclusion, I completely disagree providing free public transport in 24 hours per day with two reasons, which are harming more the environment and no more benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be usually
...f people moving in the same time, so it usually be a large transport system and use big am...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... moving in the same time, so it usually be a large transport system and use big am...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98031496063 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67230046634 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8693764789 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.416666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265408031198 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108194752132 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118262403292 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203843008897 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727730961536 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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