Many people think English language is really helpful for business communication in India, while others say it is ruining the Indian culture communication.
India is a democratic country and it has so many different culture, languages. many people use Hindi as a first language because they think it's Indian culture communication but at other hand people say English language is useful for business communication.
In India, every technical, medical, and business institute deliver their education in English. Also a multinational companies and industries use English for communication. so English language is very helpful for businessmen and entrepreneurs. Nowadays people in business use English language because they have MOU with international companies. so they have to communicate with each other in international language. India is a developing country so English language is very helpful by many people's perspective.
On other hand, some people think that English language ruining Indian culture communication. They think that Hindi should be use in India. In Indian history, Indians have been using Hindi. They think that if German use their language, china use their own language so why we should use English. According to them, all Indian institutes and schools language should be Hindi because that's our culture of communication. And English language ruining our culture of communication.
In conclusion, many people who are relate with business think that English is useful language for developing country. Remain think that it's not our language, it's ruining our culture of communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ute deliver their education in English. Also a multinational companies and industrie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61818181818 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06916145977 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468181818182 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1546043949 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513976907011 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202855426833 0.084324248473 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131464146303 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.366855355946 0.151304729494 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676060460037 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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