Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Change is a part and parcel of life and it is also applicable in professional life. There are many individuals who believe that it is good to change job once in their life. In my opinion, I believe that although their are some disadvantages of changing the career but advantages overpower the demerits. So, it is better to make shifts in work life.
There are plethora of benefits in changing profession. The predominant reason is that by doing work in various domains would help the individuals to enhance skills and to gain knowledge. In this way, person is able to solve each and every issue of any field, he or she worked, and do not have to depend on others for any kind of assistance. By having experience in multiple traits, people could get good opportunities in other organisations which satisfy all of his needs like required salary, better working conditions, good status, etcetera.
Beside that, by adopting different jobs would help people to work on various technologies and they do not get bored by doing same job throughout their life. Moreover, when employees make shift in their career, they become more attentive and active in order to learn new skills. In addition to that, having knowledge of various traits would boost their level of confidence.
Every coin has two sides. Similarly, changing work has some issues. For example, it is difficult for people to adjust in new environment and to make new friends. Sometimes, employees are not able to cope up with new technologies, they take time to get used to fresh techniques.
In conclusion, I would like to say that beside having demerits, still changing career has positive impact on the growth of employees. It is essential to shift professional life as it helps to learn new technologies and to reduce boredom in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... In my opinion, I believe that although their are some disadvantages of changing the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91503267974 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76715384756 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.008188413 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308678197079 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877685544732 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572669401336 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154948393682 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637453219146 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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