You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
say what the problem is
describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
ask the provider to solve the problem
Hello Sir,
I'm writing this letter to you to detail the problems which I've been facing since I moved to the accommodation provided by you. We agreed about an individual room in a hotel, but when I turned up at the address provided, I saw a bed and breakfast accommodation. This was very disappointing for me as I haven't gotten what we spoken.
The place is very crowded at all times due to its nature and I don't prefer to share the room with someone whom I've not met before. The location which I was expecting was near the university, but this one is very far from it and I need to spend a lot of time and money to reach the university every day. This makes me very tired and I'm not able to concentrate more on my studies.
In addition to this, the accommodation is very bad in terms of hygiene. The debris aren't cleaned at periodic intervals and we get a foul smell near the windows where the dustbins are kept. The taps in the bathroom isn't working properly and the shared kitchen isn't clean. People leave the utensils unwashed and this makes the next person who makes use of it very hard as they had to clean everything before they start to prepare their meal.
I'm looking forward to help me in providing an accommodation as we had agreed.
Yours faithfully,
Vignesh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47457627119 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55338012678 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6962787866 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893083806311 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355443517654 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432354810152 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482958549389 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468022510873 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.