Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
1. Thank them for the holiday and the photos
2. Explain why you didn’t write earlier
3. Invite them to come and stay with you
Write not less than 150 words
Dear Jane and Tabi,
I’m writing to let you guys know that I’m very pleased and delighted for hosting me and full of surprise with the stunning and beautiful pictures you guys send to me.
I apologize for not writing when I got back to Germany. Let me explain what happened in details. Upon arrival, my daughter Daisy fell seriously sick so we had to rush her to a hospital nearby. Since then I haven’t had enough time for myself. She had virus infection when I was away but she is doing great now thanks to the wonderful job of the hospital staff.
Next month on the 25th, there will be an annual festival of all the Mountain tribes. All the tribes will display unique traditional dance and perform some rituals to appease the gods. I am inviting you both over so that we can spend some quality time together. Also, it will be a perfect opportunity to meet my family.
I’ll be expecting your response.
Best wishes,
Martin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7100591716 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42730519524 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710059171598 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4113146694 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3333333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186344710364 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507787303469 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514315943626 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783230742645 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645247568921 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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