The article states the disadvantages of the let it burn policy when deal with wildfire,especially after the Yellowstone park fire and it's tremendous damage. However, the professor refutes all the disadvantages. He says that the fire had a creative effect in the ecological system not only destructive.
First of all, the article mentions the tremendous damage happened to park's trees and vegetation. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that new plant colonization have been found after the fire, which lead to more diverse and an opportunity for a new plant like new smaller plants that needed unshaded space, and new kind of seeds that needed hight level of heat to grow.
Secondly, the author of the reading states the effect of fire on animal, as it would cause destruction of habitats and disruption of food. This point is rebutted by the lecturer. She suggests that the fire would have created new opportunity for animals. She elaborates on this by mentioning that new smaller plant would have created a new habitat to certain animal like rabbits and hairs, which had attracted new predator looking for food.
Finally, the author points out that the fire have negatively affected the local economy because the tourist season cut short, and it had affected all business based on park visitors.The lecturer, On the other hand, states that it would affect economy if it happened every year. She puts forth the idea that this fire was so massive because the rain season was very low and the wind was so strong this year. In addition, the fire did not happen again and the visitors came in the next year after the fire
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what does the automated readability index mean??
automated readability index
automated readability index means:
https://www.testbig.com/forum/automated-readability-index
to get higher index score, it needs more difficult words, and more complex/compound sentences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , especially
...t it burn policy when deal with wildfire,especially after the Yellowstone park fire and its...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'park'.
Suggestion: park
...tions the tremendous damage happened to parks trees and vegetation. This point is cha...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ted all business based on park visitors.The lecturer, On the other hand, states tha...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, in addition, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61945626239 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530465949821 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9953154295 49.2860985944 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303917363361 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102516714709 0.0996497079465 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669727526141 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185918683398 0.162205337803 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413333466361 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.