The number of people who are at risk to health problems are increased due to overweight.
What is the reason of over weight?
How can this problem be avoided?
In modern era, advancement in technology has led to adverse effect in people life pattern. Overweight is one of the worst consequence faced in many old people, which leads to several health effects. Physical health awareness is declining in recent years.
Obesity is caused due to lack of physical activities and poor awareness of healthy habits. Lack of time is found as the reason for this problem said by majority of audience who took part in a survey. People should therefore take this issue seriously and act accordingly. The worst effects caused by overweight is pressure in spine, which in turn causes hip and leg pain. Daily routine is made easy with machines. People are reluctant to do their daily exercise. Food pattern also constitutes a lot to this issue. High fatty food and foods rich in sugar content are the worst enemies of overweight.
Walking is the best exercise, which can be done by most of the people easily. There are many clubs operated to created awareness in health. People can take part in trekking, cycling and other exercise, which leads to a healthy life style. Government should create more awareness in health issues, therefore people who are hesitant in doing their basic exercise or house hold works will get changed. Promotion of weight loss program is welcomed by most of the people.
To conclude, People should consider the health problem seriously and act swift in order to prevent worst effect of their health. People should take preventive measures than regretting for health difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'prevent the worst'.
Suggestion: prevent the worst
...lem seriously and act swift in order to prevent worst effect of their health. People should t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05098039216 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52594077091 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2393802606 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5555555556 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230417876509 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640014622493 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422540891341 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131937062768 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277585547177 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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