n the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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n the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Thanks to an improvement of society, people in the modern world are living longer. Although there will be undoubtedly some negative consequences of this trend, these potential problems can be mitigated if several practical solutions are implemented.
As having the longer life expectancy, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that lacking labor force which is likely to decrease worker efficiency. Further, the more people retire on pensions, the more it burdens on the welfare system. That is to say, it could consume a proportion of national budget which is from tax payer's expense as well as makes a little contribution to society. In addition, there is possibly a lot of conflicts between old and young people in families which means that it is difficult to bridge a generation gap.
However, these problems might be addressed by some measures that are proposed below. One solution could be to extend the retirement age from 60 to 65 as a result of the improvement of life qualities which makes people healthy enough to ensure productivity of work. This would allow old people to contribute more to the community as well as increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. A further measure can be for the government to change child policy in order to balance age of the population. That is to say, the government should have a tendency to encourage childbirth by creating a favorable maternity leave.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations grow older.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o arise as the populations grow older.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0153256705 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8181216133 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5232734147 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199746773514 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665887099469 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061062157891 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126271442604 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449994232605 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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