It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To nurture the child in early age with etiquette, manners and teach them for adequate communication method to behave properly in social life is considered highly in today's life. Some people believe that early age of child can acquire good habits and learn quickly sociable manner if penalize adequately whereas people argue that learning in early age is not accurate age and punishment should not be imposed. In this essay, I shall discuss the both views by analyzing this argument and explore the less severe punishment to learn social values with my personal opinion.
To start with, in advance technological era of this century children are very enthusiastic and brilliant to acquire etiquette for social communication. It has been stated that early age is perfect to learn good behavior which give good result through out the life. Children are molded in proper environment with adequate facilities and should be taught with proper process. Parents and teachers should come together and discuss their bad habits and place a routine scrutiny to secede these.
On contrary, there are myriad punishment and praises which can cultivate good manners in child and it affects the learning skills as well. One of them to give less gift on achieving the target with delay or provide good outlook and cuisine on completion of tasks. There should not be beating punishment at all.
In recapitulate, while there are less severe punishment should be offered once any child not perform well. In my opinion, best method to improve learning skills in early to remove the praise life gift. I would recommend, teachers and parents must give direction to achieve the target with accurate way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09057971014 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53074717513 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3427239104 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19737703569 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708694141622 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514102160868 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123695920386 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055591636835 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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