In many countries the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. why is this happening? what will be the effects of it on the family and Society?
It is said that in most countries the habit of eating meals with family members is not like what existed before and this is disappearing somehow. there seem to be two primary causes and a number of effects which I will discuss here.
Possibly, the main cause is the alteration in some aspects of human's life. it is clear that life is channeling to modernism which has some effects on the pattern of family relationships. Now, for example, family members have to work long-time to make a living well. Therefore, when they spend the longest time out of the home, having meal-time with family is somewhat impossible unless they try to find free-time on weekends. The further cause is unwilling to be tradition directed. These days, young people tend to follow non-traditional habits as they believe that traditions are pretty inhibiting. Willingness to be different from the past has tremendous impacts on family structure. The young individuals, For instance, prefer to eat out with their friends in fast food places while seniors often spend their time with whom are in identical ages.
The effects of this problem on people and societies can be quite serious. This issue would lead to psychological disorders. Admittedly, living in close-knit families have great impacts on characteristics of people. In these families, individuals could find a real feeling of confidence and empathy. As a result, they would be less in danger of psychological diseases. A further widely-observed effect would be disappearing family values. Decreasing these values is a major factor to increase the divorce rate in Society and subsequent issues could be considerable. examples can be seen in single-parent families which contributes to serious social issues.
Overall, modernism and making of Hard effort to provide household expenditure seem to be the main causes for vanishing the tradition of having meals with family members. Meanwhile, psychological problems and rising divorce rates would be terrible effects on both the family and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96064282161 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.282113032 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354576495289 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103263597747 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624685228403 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227570946756 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287459401551 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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