Urban area is considered better for the civilians to resides than rural area. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Many believe that urban areas is considered crucial to uplift the life style. In high- tech cities everyone get optimum opportunities to achieve massive success. However, some others have conflicting views, They think villages provide better bread and butterthan cities. Here, I partially accord with this given statement.
First and foremost, The presence of various facilities in city make our life convinient. such aa hospitals,high standard schools ,collages, banks, shopping malls and so on. People feel confortable because of sedentary life style. people get high level education comparitively villages.In cities they prepare their compititive syllabus. Additionally, The development in urban areas provide more and more opportunities to get job. such as industrilization, schools, hospitals, marketing provide job according to their skills.
Furthermore, In urban areas, there is no discrimination between people. thus every individual stand on their own because of their efficiency.every one have equal chance to show their hidden talent. So cities act as a stepping stone to earn name and fame.
However, some others have conflicting views. The existence of fresh atmosphere is essential to make people fit and fiddle. Most of the people consider that in india, if there are more than 400 people live in per square area.then its called urban area. In cities so hindrence on every public places. No one can take breathe in fresh air. In villages, there is no hustle - bustle like cities.Everywhere green field. Pollution is too few due to shortage of vehicles, industries, and so on.
In conclusion, Both have its own significance. In cities all masses get more and more opportunities to make their life easy and and appropriate. In rural areas environment is too calm.people feel relax every time. there is strong bonding between people.and support to each other at every moment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46258503401 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07431651025 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625850340136 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2194466746 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.9166666667 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.25 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116217097324 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307143375563 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632923806777 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674490421159 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357918199171 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.5 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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