"For less developed countries, disadvantages in tourism are greater than advantages". Discuss, give your opinion and examples.
For less developed countries disadvantages in tourism are greater than advantages has always been a debatable topic. Many people believe that tourism in underdeveloped nations has many problems compared with developed nations. In my opinion, it is completely agreed that there are a lot of challenges and concerns associated. This essay would further elaborate the reasons why it is a detriment with clear examples.
To commence with, it is said that many under developing nations are high risks for visitors visiting these places. This is apparent and we are seeing this since last few decades. Take a recent incident from Bangladesh, a tourist from Japan and another from Italy were shot dead by the Islamic terrorist State group. This incident clearly shows that underdeveloped countries are not safe as they lack security measures. Thus, in such type of countries, the tourist industry has more demerits compared to merits.
Furthermore, there are few aspects of tourism that may harmful to the host country. For instance, tourist place may suffer from the loss of their own traditional culture. This is mainly caused by a people in a country changing their lifestyles, customs, and language in order to serve effectively the visitors. In addition, tourists often carry expensive objects like camera, smartphones, and electronic gadgets and are unaware of the surroundings, they make a good target for theft. Crime also increases as a result of the increase in drugs and prostitution.
According to the arguments outlined above, one can reach out to the conclusion that there are more disadvantages associated with tourism in underdeveloped nations. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that due to lack of security measures and fear of losing their own culture have many problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26923076923 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90419715127 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9284955143 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159569452937 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049206637427 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838259880843 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958396720234 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908043421276 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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