Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views regarding the amount of money successful sports professionals earn. While some people think these sports stars deserve high salary, I believe this is unfair when other important professionals are not earning as much.
It is a known fact that a career lifespan of sports professionals is short in comparison to other occupations. Many successful sports players spend their childhood and adolescence training for junior competitions, become successful in 20s and retire in their 30s as a result of injuries or lacking physical strengths to compete with younger athletes. F...
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