Social networking, for instance Facebook, are thought by some to have had a huge detrimental effect on individuals as well as society and local communities. This essay agrees with that suggestion completely because of the drawbacks it brings to people. The essay will first look at how social networking can impact on academics and professionals and then discuss how these affects are overwhelming in social life style.
Many young adolescents and working professionals tend to waste their productive time in accessing Facebook and Twitter. These individuals constantly check their smart devices for status updates and others feeds from this sites which will eventually take a major portion of their working or study time. As a result, many professionals fail to achieve their targets and many students fail to pass their exam. For instance, many universities across the globe have banned their students using smartphones inside the campus to make them study.
While, these sites promote themselves as social sites, but their impact on the societies is very negative. Rather than making people more social, instead these sites are pushing people towards solitary life styles. For instance, they are too annoying to see their families and social gatherings because of they are being glued to their phones and busy chit chatting with online and social friends, ignoring family members and relatives sitting in front.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the views that social networking site really creating worse impact to society and individual. In my opinion, I would strongly recommend that has discrepanices which needs to correct to create better livable environment to every individual.
- A country I would like to visit 92
- Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals & Society. To what extent do you agree? 78
- With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend 96
- Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree? 96
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...or status updates and others feeds from this sites which will eventually take a majo...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...ee their families and social gatherings because of they are being glued to their phones and bus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47169811321 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72293896046 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0820895324 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214094339306 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787663095689 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506265040506 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122477736198 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442247931618 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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