There are different views that parents have to responsible to guide their child to be fit in society. Although some other argued that school need to take a place about this matter, I believe the both arguments, conclusively, are equally vital.
First of all, it is obvious that family, especially parents, are the the first place when children learn and imitate many behaviours in regard to have position in societal environment. There is a major factor why parent should stand toward to give best example to their children. The first and foremost, undoubtly, parenting is the fundamental position which children learn about anything such as behaviour, treating other and even the sense of emphaty although I believe that school also equally crucial along with family.
On the other hand, to be joy in society not only can be seen by parenting style both also school has an integral part to create well-being youth. First, younger should be given a comportable life in which they need learn as they age. Child, absolutely, attain more benefits from they communicate with the same age as well as horizontal relation that could not attain by parents. In addition, school surely has pedagogical system that fit with child age.
To sum up, although parent must stand toward to teach their child as basic needs, school also contribute to give extra education in order to be good member of society. The both arguments are equally right and posses equally virtues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, in regard to, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02049180328 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49808782018 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3952436941 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.363636364 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273575913102 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976285527502 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572742459545 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168320304639 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405467721351 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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