he internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Our approach to information has been greatly improved by the Internet.i strongly believe that there are huge benefits of it in comparison to repercussions.this essay will shed lights on how we are becoming more aware and informed about the things which are of our interest by leveraging internet.
Internet has changed the traditional way of getting education and business.now a day, people are getting education from the institutes which are out of their access, physically and economically.For example MOOCs,"massive open online course", is getting very popular among students, researchers, professionals and businessmen, who want to increase their skill set. Means of doing business is also changed as people can sell their products online and buy from other countries as well.
Internet has connected our world in way that it became a global village.virtually, we have access in every corner on earth, which enable us to learn about the culture and life style of different nations in other countries.moreover, we get to know, instantly, about the events which are happening in other countries.For example we can watch world sports events while setting at home in our country.Last but not the least,social media sites are also playing a starking role in bridging the distance between the people who belong to different religion,race and culture. They are helping us to keep in touch with our relatives, friends and what they are upto.
The upshot is, internet has been improved our knowledge and wisdon alot.by leveraging the coffers of information of internet, human being is exploring the new horizon of the universe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36434108527 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28252241855 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.669028323 49.4020404114 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.666666667 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147729379661 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706177373003 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189071473314 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866476947273 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00897834778754 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.0946893788 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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