Your family situation has changed, and you need a new accommodation. Write a letter to the real estate agent asking for a new arrangement. You should say
– What is your family situation?
– What are the requirements for the new accommodation?
– When do you want to move?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Rupinder Kaur currently living in William Street, New York. My flat number is.18. I am writing this letter in regards to finding a new apartment and I need your assistance to find suitable and comfortable accommodation.
We have been living in a 2BHK house since March, 2010. The accommodation is quite spacious but after the marriage of my elder brother, our family has increased, and we don't have enough room. Moreover, my brother’s wife is expecting a child in the next few months, which will make the situation even worse. In addition, my parents are in their 50’s and it is very hard for them to climb three floors every day.
We are looking for a 3BHK unfurnished house located in a good area. All the basic amenities such as electricity ,lift and water must be provided. We would be really grateful if you can arrange the same on the ground floor ranging from $950 to $1250. The lease for our current accommodation is expiring this November and we would like to shift in December.
I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Rupinder
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| 2018-05-24 | RUPINDERKAUR | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... number is.18. I am writing this letter in regards to finding a new apartment and I need your...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2010'.
Suggestion: March 2010
... have been living in a 2BHK house since March, 2010. The accommodation is quite spacious bu...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...other, our family has increased, and we dont have enough room. Moreover, my brother&...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the basic amenities such as electricity ,lift and water must be provided. We woul...
^^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...to shift in December. I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, really, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73742908685 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7260445564 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185231889702 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539575193668 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481418407344 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930368273979 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459458431687 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.