Provocative adverts have no place in a civilized society’
Provocative adverts are those advertisements which are immoral or unrealistic that affect our society. Nowadays, advertising is demand of company competition so that companies always broadcast those ads which are beneficial for them, they do not consider societies needs.
First of all, there are many ways to promote a new product such as adversity on broadcast, print media and electrical sign board. Mostly ads telecasting in between of TV shows that attract the customer buy those things. When customer purchased that product they realized that is not true which are shown on TV.For instance, AXE ads shows, a girl follow a guy only because he is using AXE body perfume but in reality it is fake, nothing as such happens in reality.
Moreover, provocative adverts always misguides their customer. As result of it , when customer see some action which is done by their favorite actors they try to imitate them. For example, in soft drink ad model perform stunts after drinking it. This ad show whenever somebody drink this soft drink they got super power. But reality is beyond it. It is not good for health, some people have to suffer from health problems after drinking it.
To conclude, advertisement is best tool for marketing but as we all know ,”all glitter is not gold” because some of the advertisements are immoral or ineffective and they are not in favor of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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... attract the customer buy those things. When customer purchased that product they re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04310344828 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68558438002 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7363953674 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936536886338 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372535817435 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528410120701 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580032150419 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364056747186 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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