The twentieth century was great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered about the twentieth century?
Every invention every new technology are making our life easier and guaranteed. Even engineers and researchers are developing so many useful ideas everyday, you must know that almost all the fundamental principles of everything, including, living organisms, computer technologies and physics of life, were already invented in the twentieth century. For me, the most crucial invention that we must remember was the identification of DNA structure. Every invasive and non invasive disease diagnosing technology, genetically modified organisms and treatment technology development are based on the understanding the DNA structure.
DNA is a tiny molecules that is contained in every single cell of a living organisms. It defines how we look, how we talk, how we act and even what kind of disease we tend to have. Like it defines, it is stable which can be stored from ancestors to descendants. As I have written above, DNA based disease diagnosing technology is highly specific and guaranteed way to now if I am ill and how bad it is. Let`s imagine that you have a helicobacter infection. In order to take the treatment, you have to be proven by diagnosing it by giving a biological sample-biopsy, blood, saliva, gastric biopsy etc. Experts will isolate the helicobacter DNA from the sample and put it into machine which can count the number of bacterial DNA. The more DNA counted on the machine, the more you tend to ill hard.
As the number of people who live on the earth increase, the more food resourse will be required to keep them alive. Starvation is the biggest problem that 5 people die because of lack of nutrition supply. Researchers have been working really hard to investigate the technology which can make plenty of food by using limited amount of resource. As a result, they created the genetically modified plants, including corn, rise and many other plants. It gives us an opportunity to grow fast growing, non pesticides or insecticides using and resistant to environmental stress plant. For example, genetic engineers put particular DNA sequence of insect into a corn DNA sequence in order to make it resistant to insects. By modifying the DNA, we do not only save the natural resourses we save time, money and many people`s live who might have died because of starving.
There are only two main problems which the doctors are facing. First is they still could not find the way to live forever, second is they still not able to treat tumor perfectly. Even so, many researchers are still trying to figure out these problems. In order to find, they use some DNA technologies too. For instance, they put tumor inducing DNA sequence into model organisms and make them artificially ill. Moreover, they try different types of treatment chemicals to see if it works or not. Since what we know is small in contrast to what we do not know, they still could not find the answer.
In twentieth century almost all of the main principles on the earth had already investigated. As a bioengineer, I see the determination of DNA structure influenced a lot to improve the life quality of human. Highly specific diagnosing, treatment and research technology, all of them works by knowing the DNA characteristics. People have used it to make many things, they are still using it and I hope that they will keep using it to make brighter life for all the living organisms on the earth.
- The twentieth century was great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered about the twentieth century? 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ers are developing so many useful ideas everyday, you must know that almost all the fund...
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Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'molecule'?
Suggestion: molecule
...nding the DNA structure. DNA is a tiny molecules that is contained in every single cell ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'organism'?
Suggestion: organism
...tained in every single cell of a living organisms. It defines how we look, how we talk, h...
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Line 4, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in contrast to what we do not know, they still could not find the answer. In twe...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...he answer. In twentieth century almost all of the main principles on the earth had alread...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, still, even so, for example, for instance, in contrast, kind of, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2826.0 1977.66487455 143% => OK
No of words: 572.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94055944056 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88128012313 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493006993007 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 902.7 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9064745179 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63333333333 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0526663925763 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0150187785637 0.076458572812 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340094003134 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324016039617 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185261848845 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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