Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support.
I am strongly disagree with this topic. In my opinion, in the world everyone has their own freedom. Young people are new generation who knows what is right or wrong thing. as well as they are the creator of the future. So we should trust them rather than stick them in strict rules.
Young people are those who are going to handle society with their new thoughts to keep society on top. So if we try to bind them in strict rules, they can not make any better change which would be helpful for the society. Beyond this thing we should be encourage them to think for society. In society, after some time period changes should be done this changes can be done by these young people. Same protocol can be harmful for the society. For instance in the government, they makes changes after some time. Rules are important in society. Every person should be Disciplined but not the thing like imposing the strict rules. For that we should tell them importance of the of rules. It should be not like give burden on youth.
In conclusion, rules should be followed by everyone but before that we should give them a chance to know the world as well as rules are not for strictly to be followed It should be followed. With this let give a chance to youth to make their own rules.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
I am strongly disagree with this topic. In my opinion, in the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...who knows what is right or wrong thing. as well as they are the creator of the fut...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...society. Beyond this thing we should be encourage them to think for society. In society, ...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...y. For instance in the government, they makes changes after some time. Rules are imp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce in the government, they makes changes after some time. Rules are important in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4358974359 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13661538024 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4355270448 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0588235294 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7647058824 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0520089457249 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210645353326 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360938932176 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507317281828 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234020008158 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.