The definition of success varies as field alters. There are many definitions of success are available worldwide. Many people in the world relates theme of a successful person with money. Although some people believe that a person who earns a ton of money is successful, others disagree with that. As far as I am concerned, I strongly concur with the statement which states that people who earn a lot of money are successful. According to classical thinkers, money is an only motivating factor to fulfill his/her needs. It acts as an incentive for a person. I have explored my views in the following lines.
First and foremost, there are many industrialists, businessmen, doctors, etc in the world who are deemed as the successful persons. Their reputation exists not only in a single country but also worldwide. More importantly, the main reason for their popularity and reputation is that they earn a lot of money. Hence, they are deemed as successful people. For example, Mr. Mukesh Ambani, a founder of reliance industry and jio company, earns a number of penny per second. Also, we come from very poor background to one of the richest person in India. Therefore, because of his richness, people regard him as a successful person.
Secondly, as we discussed earlier for one of the industrialist, same thing is applicable for a sports person or an athlete. Typically, athlete or sports person arrives at peek of success after struggling from poverty because of poor family background. But due to their perseverance and diligency, they play for a country. Sports persons earn both respect from their fans as well as money from board. Ultimately, they earn reputation and achieves zenith of the success.
However, we watch, read, and observe many scientists and researchers who work hard in their laboratories to explore world. They create inventions and hence, today we are able to live so liberty and ease. These people are regarded not for earning a lot of money but for proud. They possess more honor from people of a society. Moreover, generally, money is not motivating factor for them. What’s more, they fix a target to achieve. Hence, when they accomplish that motto or aim, they are deemed as successful people.
In conclusion, it is obvious from the above discussion that people who earn a lot of money as compare to other people are respected as successful persons. In short, a person who achieves all needs such as phisiological need, security need, esteem need, etc are regarded as successful person. Since needs are accomplished through money, we can directly assert that money is an essential factor to become a successful person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02488687783 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80470816144 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502262443439 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4326481599 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0333333333 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190235387513 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561056878107 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749638714369 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120085090926 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793367633286 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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