The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages to disadvantages? Share personal examples in your essay.
Internet has revolutionised the world in many ways. Among these, it has made it possible for people to work from home. In my opinion, this working arrangement has indeed been beneficial in delivering a high-quality work content despite a few disadvantages. The striking balance achieved in work and personal life along with the immense freedom facilitated to the workforce will be analysed in this essay.
Firstly, this remote working arrangement provides increased flexibility with the working hours. For example, being a mother of two this type of an arrangement works wonders for me. I am able to fit into my children’s schedule without disrupting their pattern, and also be able to complete my projects on time as my productivity soars with the satisfaction of seeing happy kids. Thus, internet enables a healthy work life balance in an era where everyone is working around the clock.
In addition to this internet predominantly plays a role in attaining freedom by this work arrangement. This can be illustrated when looking into my colleague’s life. She is a busy mom and an entrepreneur who has benefited massively by this. She doesn’t physically have to be at the restaurant she owns as she can monitor and manage the essential daily tasks remotely, the positive effects of remote working can be clearly seen from this scenario.
In conclusion; Although not physically working in an office based environment brings in loneliness and easy distraction, I strongly feel the ramifications of remote working, at least in my personal situation, outweigh the drawbacks and thus I prefer to engage my professional endeavours at the comfort of my home. This new phenomenon can be widely practiced by many in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, thus, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20567375887 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15393188795 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8650629214 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296298944571 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122010336276 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976588468363 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193964341497 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101049471846 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.