" The table shows the figure for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980."
The diagram below helps to compare the figures for imprisonments in various countries between 1930 and 1980.
It is clearly visible from the table that there were great fluctuations and the height of figures has changed during the given period.The smallest amount of prisoners belongs to Great Britain which has grown from 30000 to 80000 between decades. Meanwhile, in Australia the level of imprisonment fluctate in different years and finally became the smallest index among five countries in 1980.
In 1930 the quantity of prisons was balanced in New Zealand and United States, but during the years this equality has changed. For instance, at last example the indicator of New Zealand decreases, but in United States the height of the figure became the greatest among the given countries in 1980.The amount of prisons in Canada was worrying in 1930 but during 51 years it decreased and became the second biggest indicator in 1980.
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Sentence: Meanwhile, in Australia the level of imprisonment fluctate in different years and finally became the smallest index among five countries in 1980.
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