Owing to the problems currently our ecosystem is facing due to environmental issues, many people argue that money spent on space travel is not worthwhile and it should be spent to annihilate environmental problems. I agree with that notion and reasons behind this agreement will be discussed through this essay.
Global warming, one of the environmental problems which our ecosystem is witnessing, is real and treat to our planet. The Rising temperature of earth has created many problems which has been seen more frequently in the form of hurricanes. storms, floods, mass extinction of species. Many research suggest that it is due to the pollution, and government should do every possible measures to curb this menace. More money should be spent on the development of many new technologies which can be used efficiently to control pollution.For example, solar panel, wind mills, vehicles running on non fossil fuels can help in solving this problem, however these options are more costlier than the conventional energy sources and government should spent more money on subsidy so that people can use these alternate options.
Furthermore, one of the major environmental problems is mass extinction of many species on earth as well in ocean which contributes to imbalance in ecosystem, and this pose a threat to other species because they are part of food chain. Money must be spent in this direction to protect every creature on this planet because everyone is dependent on some other species and if a species will no longer exists then other will automatically die.
In conclusion, In this essay we analyzed why it important to spent money on environmental issues instead on space travel. Our planet has been facing real threat of global warming and it should be first given first priority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Storms
...e frequently in the form of hurricanes. storms, floods, mass extinction of species. Ma...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: Much research; A good deal of research
...ms, floods, mass extinction of species. Many research suggest that it is due to the pollution...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...ss extinction of species. Many research suggest that it is due to the pollution, and go...
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Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...e used efficiently to control pollution.For example, solar panel, wind mills, vehic...
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Line 3, column 666, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'costlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: costlier
...this problem, however these options are more costlier than the conventional energy sources an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15358361775 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8134751788 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539249146758 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.3868424785 50.4703680194 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.272727273 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350446054049 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131870809491 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115193759533 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243225088513 0.151781067708 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102191881046 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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