Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Undoubtedly, TV is one of the important inventions of the human’s history. TV not only entertain people and also make them aware of their surroundings. Some experts are of the view that it a medium to spread the news. Here, in the below essay I will further elaborate my viewpoint.
Television acts as an unlimited source of entertainment, news, knowledge and advertisements showing aspects of our lives. Channels like History, Discovery, National Geographic shows you the things that you are not even aware of. These channels feature content involving nature, science, culture, and history along with other entertainment programs. With their cognitive learning programs, they broaden the horizon of people especially students. A large body of research indicates that children learn better through visuals.
In addition news channels keep you updated with current happenings and events from around the globe. People can know about Syria’s civil war, watch the live update of American Presidential election or where NYSE closed today. In just a matter of time, TV brings you the breaking by pressing an appropriate button. Or you can watch any of your favorite programs. For example, it brings me the weather report so to plan my day well in advance.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, it is not wrong to say that TV like a companion for some. It is there is every household of a nation and influences life of people living in society. To conclude, TV is one of the miracles of science and it is up to us to make the best use of it.
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- Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in the city while others say it is better to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 88
- Nowadays it is noticed that cultural mixing is reflected within local cultural practices. Do you think it is good for the society? 84
- The Growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in a effort to deal withthe health issues involved Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the s 71
- The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems...so who do u think Should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individuals? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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..., TV is considered as stress buster and many take the advantage of this. In todays stress...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86879432624 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8837026823 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1657894643 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225930107395 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805724917157 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711855375337 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1276599479 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765661187296 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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