Some people prefer following the same routine everyday like eating the same food for breakfast, reading books at a particular time and likewise. From tv stars to super models, a solid daily routine is a key to success. Personally, I don’t like being repetitive in my daily life and avoid following a course of action.
Repetitive behaviors or routines are important to many effective people as it allows a better control of the everyday life or a process but consequently it restricts the mind’s ability to improve beyond certain limits. Acting or behaving in a limited framework makes the person lazy as it causes us to lose our interest in adopting new habits. When anyone locks oneself in a habit or routine, he/she refuses to change.
Many experts believe that changing a routine or moving between two activities, can be distressing for some people and it greatly increased their refusal of the challenge. What I believe is, avoiding routine can have numerous benefits on the well-being of the mind and overall personality of the individual. When we shake up the routine, we opt to do one thing differently. For the good reasons, sometimes a different perspective is all we need to change the particular process or situation. By restricting my freedom of action, I definitely do not want to restrict my mind from enriching the knowledge base.
For example, every day I listen to music from different genres to diversify my experience of music and to stimulate my mind. To conclude, though routine offers a sense of security by constructing a comfort zone, but I like to challenge personal stabilization and ask for unusual experience in my daily life.
- The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 55
- Some people could stay effective in their lives by doing the repetitive routine, such as eating the same diet. Do you think it can apply to everyone? 79
- In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why? 85
- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion 77
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, likewise, may, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 343.0 242.827586207 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04081632653 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78481364537 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562682215743 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 379.143842365 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6091611987 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.705882353 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255227082376 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784568990453 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105906332534 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126988652059 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151018943553 0.0609392437508 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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