Some people could stay effective in their lives by doing the repetitive routine, such as eating the same diet. Do you think it can apply to everyone?
Some people do not prefer to change their daily routine and want to continue with the same everyday processes. For some people that might help as such repetitive processes give them confidence. However, as per my opinion, such practice in a long run creates certain damage to overall personality of a person. This essay will discuss about possible negative outcomes of this trend with relative examples.
Firstly, even though same daily routine gives us confidence to perform our task efficiently, such same schedule do not offer change to our body and mind to release stress and pressure of work. For instance, many workers do robotic work every day in which they do not need to use their mind. Such workers can not learn different methods in their field as they prefer to continue with the same job. Hence, robotic life can not help us to achieve our goals and dreams.
Secondly, repetitive routine does not offer much needed mental and physical change that our body seeks. Today, youngsters wanted to do something new and different everyday because they want to enjoy uncertainty and challenges. For instance, many experienced professionals nowadays leave their stable and well-paid jobs and join start-ups to do something different.
In conclusion, to enjoy our life thoroughly, our mind and body required uncertainty which gives thrill and excitement to our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...anted to do something new and different everyday because they want to enjoy uncertainty ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.5418719212 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15178571429 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59793812965 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575892857143 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2264600787 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213457153707 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819447079199 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647129975668 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117963236126 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765924266597 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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