You arranged a delivery to home. But there are some problems with the delivery. Write a letter complain to the manager of the delivery company.
In you letter, you should write
• describe your order
• describe the problems with the delivery
• suggest what the shop should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to put an official complain to you for some furniture that I received them at home damaged when I utilized your company for the delivery.
The items are a big coach, four chairs and tea table. When I made a booking with your company, I was amazed to know that your company can deliver such big furniture. The coach is three seated with long side stands, and four chairs are relatively small but extremely heavy. There was available space in the tuck; therefore, I decided to send also the tea-table in the same delivery order.
I have booked a door-to-door delivery service, and the offer was very interesting for that long distance. When the order has arrived, I found out that there are some serious scratches on the chairs, and one leg of the coach is broken. These items have a considerable amount of money; hence, your action is required.
I took comprehensive insurance policy with your company, and my policy states that all items are covered. Therefore, I would ask that you address this matter personally with your insurance department and that you review the attached invoices of all damaged items to be reimbursed.
I look forward to receiving the money back of all damaged items.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ged items. Yours faithfully, Ayoub
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5782658551 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9401027922 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0833333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22212481498 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655050380933 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507852874339 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102861771551 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625961290466 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.