You arranged a delivery to home. But there are some problems with the delivery. Write a letter complain to the manager of the delivery company.
In you letter, you should write
• describe your order
• describe the problems with the delivery
• suggest what the shop should do
Dear Sir/Madam,
The purpose of my writing today is to inform you about the problem of the item delivered to my home from your company.
Let me explain the situation in more detail. Last week I placed Cellphone order on your company's official web site,the reference number for the same is #CELL1873. It stated me like the order will reach the address that i have been specified over there in a week. The complete payment has been performed via my credit card and here is the transaction id #PYMT0034567.
Lastly I received my order after a week. It was a great shock to me after i unwrapped the box. The mobile phone screen got broken into pieces. Herewith i attached the photo's of my order that i received, as proof along with this letter. However, you know well how costly the phone is, and i got frustrated after seeing my dream phone like that. Am sending back the parcel to you. It will be great, if you send me the new phone as quickly as possible or refund my payment.
Your support in this matter is greatly appreciated. Furthermore, an open line of communication, from your side, in this matter would really help out.
Your's faithfully,
A.Sridhar
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- You arranged a delivery to home. But there are some problems with the delivery. Write a letter complain to the manager of the delivery company.In you letter, you should write• describe your order• describe the problems with the delivery• suggest wha 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st week I placed Cellphone order on your companys official web site,the reference...
^^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...lphone order on your companys official web site,the reference number for the same is #C...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...rder on your companys official web site,the reference number for the same is #CELL1...
^^^^
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... week. It was a great shock to me after i unwrapped the box. The mobile phone scr...
^
Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...screen got broken into pieces. Herewith i attached the photos of my order that i ...
^
Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... i attached the photos of my order that i received, as proof along with this lett...
^
Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... know well how costly the phone is, and i got frustrated after seeing my dream ph...
^
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: Am I
... after seeing my dream phone like that. Am sending back the parcel to you. It will...
^^
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sridhar
... really help out. Yours faithfully, A.Sridhar
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, really, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61835748792 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55092591798 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657004830918 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4354436024 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156570438906 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476047729987 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521053866513 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960248475368 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747368333135 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.