Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly. what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages
In recent years travelling to other countries and places or work for some period of time is popular among many school leavers before going to the university directly. It's having same amount advantages and disadvantages like both sides of a coin. Few students are opting to work in order earn money for the college expenses and others have plans to travel few places to come out of routine procedures, before entering into new era of education. In my opinion after school it's better to go to university directly rather than taking any diversion.
The main advantage of performing some travel or work is effective in many ways. However, nowadays students are facing much pressure on school and they are working hard enough to crab the seats on reputed universities for their career betterment. Majority of the students may feel themselves it will be better, if you take a small break from studies will make them more focussed during the university studies. Other section of students have some other thought process like opting to work for couple of years will really mould them practically and it will be helpful for them during the college academics in later. Recent study insists that most of the students are preferring to go for work before university in order to take care the expenses on their own. However, this kind of increasing attitude in recent generation is a good sign, So that they know the value of money.
The main practical challenges faced by the students who are not going to colleges directly post their school education are many. Assume if a student planned for any travel may have highly possibility to drop the plan of joining the college. Especially, students those who preferred to work before pursuing their degree, have high chances to be a school drop out. Recent survey conducted by magazine clearly highlighted, the students who are earning are not in a mindset to join the college. Meanwhile, they think like they are in a job already and anyhow after college we are going to work. Am doing the same right now ? is it necessary to do higher studies.? this thought is not the correct one. Even though, if they are working it's not enough for them to attain heights without pursing the degree.
Is going university directly after the successful completion of schooling is right? some students have the perception that's the best approach and few tend to travel in the direction exactly inverse. According to my point of view i strongly believe. Heading to the university directly post successful school completion may have lot of advantages rather than the disadvantages. It will definitely bring some better career and life for those compared to the persons who are taking break.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, while, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2250.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 459.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90196078431 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5576749839 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498910675381 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.139883928 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45833333333 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360034798337 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965845306585 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919963440298 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228939159782 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766859516109 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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