Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly. what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages and what is your own opinion?
In recent years travelling to other countries and places or work for some period of time is popular among many school leavers before going to the university directly. Few may tend to work for the college expenses and others may have some travel plans, before entering into new era of education. In my opinion after school it's better to go to university directly rather than taking any diversion.
The main advantage of performing some travel or work is effective in many ways.Nowadays students have pressure on school and working hard enough to crab the seats on reputed universities for their career betterment. Majority feel break will make them more focused during the university studies. Other's think like work boost financially. Recent study insists that most of the students are preferring to go for work before university in order to take care expenses on their own. However, this kind of increasing attitude in recent generation is a good sign.
The main practical challenges are. Assume if a student planned for any travel or work may have highly possibility to be a school drop out. Recent survey conducted by magazine clearly highlighted,earning students are losing interest to join college. Meanwhile, they feel I have job already and anyhow after college am going to work. Am doing the same right now ? is it necessary to do higher studies.? this thought is not the correct one. Even though, if they are working it's not enough for them to attain heights without pursing the degree.
Is going university directly after the successful completion of schooling is right? some students have the perception that's the best approach and few may think vice versa. According to my point of view, I strongly believe. Heading to the university directly post successful school completion may have lot of advantages rather than the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07894736842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76182756174 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9587851206 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347658908647 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908443865372 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913614783672 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216662619061 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980365387227 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.