'Earth is not ours, and we do not belong to it'. It is undoubtedly the case that waste materials which are also affecting the society adversely. In this essay, i am going to examine the possible reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some of the proactive measures that both authorities and individuals could implement to curb the problem of garbage and waste products .
The first step is to understand why it made the worse situation for earth. Broadly speaking, the main cause is industrialization because industries put their waste chemicals products into the river or sea and this led the water polluted. Moreover, some factories make products such as plastic bags, gloves and other things which cannot be usedagain and again.Therefore, these are the non recyclable things which cannot be used into other manufacturing things. That is why, people throw these types of wastages after use. Furthermore, one option has to be to improve this condition, factories should be banned to make use of plastic and other things which could nit be used in future again.
Apart from that, the biggest cause of this problem is that people have become materialistic now as compared to past. They want to show their rich heritage and considered themselves superior than others by purchasing lots of expensive things. Whenever, people saw some new prodycts and materials in the market, they preffered to buy them as well as they throw away their old materials here and there which makes the earth unclean. Moreover, government should do something to make people aware regarding the value of earth as if this system would be run like today then the day is not so far when earth would be full of dieases due to the nonsesnse of people so government should play its crucial role to decline this problem. It should make aware by opening campaigns at different places.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worsewhile, it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this. This could probably be solved if people would learn the importance if things and when they would be aware regarding the value of it. Government should also pay some attention to make the earth neat and clean.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64344364318 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533156498674 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1366962437 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236261604286 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749332645361 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484114904689 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156696953067 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166148591525 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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