The line chart bellow shows serious violent crime levels from 1978 to 2000 in the US. Serious violent crimes include rape, robbery, aggravated assault and homicide. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the line chart reveal the number of different types of dangerous crimes in the US between 1978 and 2000.
It is clear from the line chart that the figure for arrests was lowest during twenty two years. Meanwhile, total violent crime was the category receiving the most expenditure in the research time.
In the first eight years, there was a fluctuation in total violent crime to over 3,5 offences, then, the figure peaked at 4,5 offenses in 1988. The number of total violent crime fell from the highest point and continued a stable decrease with slight decceleration to 3 offenses in 2000. At the same time, victimisations reported to police is subject to overall volatility until 1990, over 2 offenses and declined slightly at 1,5 offences in ten year's time
Standing at 1 offense in 1978, crimes recorded by police jump further to over 1,5 offenses in 1994 and saw a slight lull in the next six years. While, arrests for violent crime bottomed at under 0,5 offenses in the first year and saw a modest growth of 0,5 offences in 1986. After a mild decrease from 0,25 offences in 1988, the figure experience a slight recovery to 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-two
...he figure for arrests was lowest during twenty two years. Meanwhile, total violent crime w...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'reported policing'.
Suggestion: reported policing
... 2000. At the same time, victimisations reported to police is subject to overall volatility until ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73631840796 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45758051497 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8454125199 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197403124852 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103737297881 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480809098228 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142142894114 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358109763503 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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