Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviors. Others disagree and think that host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experiences and support your arguments with example and relevant evidence
In the last two decades, the tourism industry has emerged globally and different kinds of tourism industry sprung up to meet the ever-growing demands of the tourists. Owing to the influx of the tourists in the country, while some people believe that visitors should adhere by local cultures, customs and the way people interact with each other, other holds the views that host country should exhibit the tolerance towards the other’s culture and accept difference full heartily. I shall explain both views in the essay.
On the one hand, people assert that travelers must be acquainted with other countries norms, culture, local environment etc. before visiting the country and they have valid rationales to support this. Firstly, different countries have different beliefs and cultures and one’s actions can be interpreted in various ways depending on the country they visit. For instance, when people meet in western countries, they genteelly kiss each other while in the Middle East such gestures are considered obnoxious and subject to the prosecution. Secondly, it is generally seen sometimes, that host country's people do not accept the tourists as they find their acts unacceptable in their society. As a result, local people oppose them and even thrash sometimes.
On the other hand, some people believe that nations should proudly accept the diversifications and create a conducive environment for people visiting from other places. It is believed that respect and love are reciprocal in nature and if one nation values the culture and traditions of other nations, host country’s culture and value are also admired by others. For example, India is famous for accepting the other religious beliefs and show empathy towards other cultures. Consequently, Indian culture is given high regards in other places in the world. Furthermore, the size of the tourism industry is becoming bigger day by day and it proved to be a game changer for some nations who did not oppose the foreign tourists and became prosperous.
In the conclusion, though some actions of tourist may cause unrest among locals, countries must welcome the tourist and show acceptance and regards for the people following different cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33144475921 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67533406997 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7049889855 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.466666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311393350211 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102557786107 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088032577759 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192551656991 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717655223368 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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