Some people think parents are responsible for transporting their children to school while others believe it is the responsibility of the government? Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

with the steady growth in modernization ; The lifestyle of people have been greatly affected . They have achieved various milestone . However , some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever . one such issue here is of who has the responsibilities for pick up and drop up the children to school ; parents or authorities ? Through this essay , I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and shape up my opinion by the end .

Taking one side of the argument , there are people who believe that parents are responsibilities for transporting their children to school . They raise many assertions in defence such as drivers are quite careless regarding the safety of children . They often make use of mobile phone while driving , it is dangerous for their children life .so, parents should drop and pick their children . A particulary be at best epitome of this every parents love their children and it is the responsibility for transporting the children to school.

One the flip side ,there are antagonists to this assertion who believe that it has the government responsibility for transporting the children to school . They bolster their viewpoint by claiming that every parents are working parents in the home for fullfil every need their children as they doing job for earn huge amount of money . So , that is why authortities have to take responsibility for transporting the children .

Nevertheless ,weighing both the options , I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground one effective clap require the use of hands so it is varies from person to person . government should issue ruled and regulations regarding the safety of children .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18014705882 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00069299734 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522058823529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6327458699 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406904356908 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147384579837 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132260132903 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239556230978 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133373048282 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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