some people give the opinion that working women do not pay attention to bring up children . hence they should be discouraged from doing job , what extent agree and disagree
In today’s every person is working to earn money, even trend is going to change, and women also started to work in every sector with men. There are some people, who argue that famines should be discouraged from doing job, as they are not providing proper time to their children. I completely disagree to the statement, I going to explain my views in forthcoming paragraphs.
There are myriad of points accountable for my view, the most preponderant one is that women also has a right to do work like male in every field, and nobody can discourage her from this thing. For example, nowadays females are working in army, navy and for space exploration like Kalpana chawla, who to do something for their country. Furthermore, they can want to become independent and to gain stability in life, while working in any specific area. This approach helps them to fulfill their own exigencies.
The another relevant point in my mind is that in present time only male cannot run family expenditure smoothly, so it is necessary that both partners should work to accomplish all amenities of family members. Lastly, now everything is modified and women are so much educated, so it is good to for women to utilize their knowledge and study for success and earning money. For instance, they are working as pilot, teacher, doctor also.
To conclude, one can say that whole life is depend on earning of early years of life. Women can earn and work for bright future of their children and for herself also to get everything that she want to acquire in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, lastly, so, while, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80223880597 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53648746433 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.615162562 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197064909204 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754046219795 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811846184953 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12590135403 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767534696806 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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