people think that university study for young people is good in our country and other think that mechanics and builders should be encouraged the most because our country need them. discuss both views and own views
It is debatable issue that which option is better for success in future study or skill. Some people argue that university education is good for youngsters, while others opine that mechanical and builders should be motivated in our nation, as their demand is more. I will discuss both views along with my opinion in subsequent paragraphs.
There is army of people, who convinced that university education is utmost imperative in our country for grown up because without it they cannot make their future bright. For instance, well ranked jobs and placements can only acquire with good knowledge, which can gain with university education. Furthermore, they can get expose to number of things, which are impossible to grasp without higher study, such as personality traits and communication skills.
On the other side of coin, opponents said that nowadays due to development and advancement demand of hand work is surging, such as building construction, mechanical etcetera. There is need to guide youngster for involving in these sectors, means they can choose these for future work. Moreover, these areas provide freedom to them to do work freely without any restriction, which are mainly imposed in office work.
I am favoring former view, as I deem that without education nobody can work efficiently in every sector, even they are doing their own business. For example, if person is running their business of designing, then his or her own personality, educational background attract the customers. There is need to provide support to them youngsters for development of strong educational background.
To conclude, education and skillful work both has their own importance, but skill can only attract others when some has ability to modulate each and every thing in effective way,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29824561404 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77536096771 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.912522342 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229471960368 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778208869568 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677860703415 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123627102385 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904817065482 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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