The claims that animals have right has been the subject of much debate since the 1970. Are zoos helping or hunting our animals? Should zoo be banned. Do you agree or disagree
Zoo play crucial role in the life of animal. In the past they practice some bad things with animal but today they generally very exist for the welfare of animal. So, there is need to reinforce its existence. I completely agree to the statement and going to explain my views in forthcoming paragraphs.
At the outset, everything is modifying and image of zoo is also changing like now zoo act as medium of education and knowledge about fauna which is at the edge of distinction. Furthermore, it also preserves the various species of world for new generation, who do not know regarding ecology and the habitat of particular species. Additionally, zoo also provide better environment to different species for living.
The another relevant point is that now a plethora of programs are started in zoo to save the animals for instance tiger breeding program to surge their number. Zoo also provide direct contact with ample of species so and everyone can closely study about animals in single place without any hindrance.
I can say that zoo provide protection to fauna and saves their life rather tha using them as source of entertainment.
To conclude, there is need to motivate the efforts taken for zoo conservation in positive manner without creating any problem in their activities for animals safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in their activities for animals safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02293577982 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73571459259 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2616189163 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5454545455 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169440898767 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621302876681 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314683479352 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916307372682 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025524857463 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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