Many people think regions affect successful persons . what your's opinion about native regions and accomplished persons influence on the regions they belong to?
It is debatable issue that region where person live has big contribution for his or her success, as it is closely linked to individual. I strongly appreciate this view that both particular regions of masses has significant role in his or her success. I will discuss this essay in forthcoming paragraphs.
Highlighting my view, I deem that area where folk exist play great contribution for his or her achievements. Such as, if one school going child live with good peers, then definitely he or she can learn good thing for them, which help them in study and development of great characters. Furthermore, in family also if everyone providing good guidance and support for any right decision taken by them. Then, they can become more productive in nature to accomplish every task with more affords.
The conducive idea in my is that availabilities of all facilities in particular residential place also contributed for their success. Namely, education and job opportunities, which expose the human being to external world and act as helping hands for success. Lastly, language, culture and tradition of region where anyone live helps to develop their personality and decide about their future.
To recapitulate, one can say that the affects of region of particular population for their success cannot be ignored, as it contributes up to maximum range for person’s success and achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, then, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23111111111 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01225808413 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648888888889 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0449804766 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183334726687 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070875692498 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781849176337 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132200828787 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722717363486 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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