» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
» You should write at least 150 words.
The given two diagrams illustrate the information about divergent stages as well as the equipments which are used for the cement method and it indicates about the use of cement for the production of concrete for building purposes.
It is crystal clear from the first diagram that the limestone and clay both are crushed together through crusher for producing the powder and this produced powder is passed to a rotating heater with the help of mixer for giving the heat.Finally,the grinder takes place to complete the whole process for producing the cement and then cement is packed in the bags for sale in the market.
In the second diagram,it can be clearly seen that how the concrete is produced for building work.Firstly, water,cement and sand as well as gravel which are used in several amount to mix together in a concrete mixer machine and then machine rotates fast for mixing all the ingredients to create the concrete.
Overall,the steps of making cement are more complicated rather than producing concrete because it requires the various sophisticated machinery but the concrete production requires limited components in right proportion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...h the help of mixer for giving the heat.Finally,the grinder takes place to complete the...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...elp of mixer for giving the heat.Finally,the grinder takes place to complete the who...
^^^^
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... in the market. In the second diagram,it can be clearly seen that how the concre...
^^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
... concrete is produced for building work.Firstly, ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e is produced for building work.Firstly, water,cement and sand as well as gravel ...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cement
... water,cement and sand as well as gravel which are us...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'several amounts'.
Suggestion: several amounts
...and as well as gravel which are used in several amount to mix together in a concrete mixer mac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he ingredients to create the concrete. Overall,the steps of making cement are m...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ts to create the concrete. Overall,the steps of making cement are more complic...
^^^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "requires limited" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'limiting' or 'to be limited'.
Suggestion: limiting; to be limited
...ry but the concrete production requires limited components in right proportion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, second, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2311827957 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81172515694 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8190354854 43.030603864 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 243.25 112.824112599 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.5 22.9334400587 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.23603664747 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383387705592 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224819514489 0.103423049105 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112574346979 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224819514489 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112574346979 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 13.2329268293 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 61.2550243902 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 10.3012195122 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.