Writing task 2 (an essay)Some people say that the Internet is the most important invention. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your reasons and examples.

With the study growth in modernization,the lifestyles of people have been greatly affected.they have achived various milestones however some issues remain changed and as complex aseven.one of them is the internet is beneficial.in this essay i shell explore the weightage side.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
With the study growth in modernization,the lifestyles of people have been greatly ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he internet is beneficial.in this essay i shell explore the weightage side.
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Message: Did you mean 'she'll'?
Suggestion: she'll
... internet is beneficial.in this essay i shell explore the weightage side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 41.998997996 12% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 236.0 1615.20841683 15% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 41.0 315.596192385 13% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75609756098 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.53043953444 4.20363070211 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39856847773 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 36.0 176.041082164 20% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.878048780488 0.561755894193 156% => OK
syllable_count: 76.5 506.74238477 15% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 236.0 106.682146367 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115215543378 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115215543378 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115215543378 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.0946893788 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.48 50.2224549098 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.02 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.83 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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